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. Joyce Evans
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The Sailing Club Site
The PAI Medical Group
The Sound Choice
Solutions for Business
Services Net ... janitorial company
The site is a half-completed website that I'm making for a Janitorial company in
Arkansas. This is really my first actual site that I'm going to make any money with,
so I'd like to here any and all criticisms that are out there. KEEP IN MIND: I haven't
compressed any of the images yet, so the load time is probably double what it should
be. Thanks, Drew http://www.building-services.net Submitted by: D. Stephens
* Joyce said:
Drew, I like your graphic on the top of the pages. Here are my comments on
While almost all web sites are under some stage of construction, you really don't
have to tell your readers so. Please never use under construction signs, it's
very unprofessional. All websites should always be under construction. You said in
your review request "I haven't compressed images yet" (be considerate,
do this before asking people to donate their time...)
__ I'm confused here, what is it you want us to review?
There are some images and very little content.
__ Your home page (not the entry page) only has links,
maybe it isn't done, I don't know, but something needs to go in the center, an introduciton
of some sort of the Company. You don't really need to say "Welcome to...."
it should be implied by their arrival.
__ Your About US page looks very nice. Although the
content needs to be written to sound professional, not trying to be offensive, but
it doesn't sound like a professional wrote it, it's not real bad, just mediocre.
__ Hope this helps, and please resubmit when you optimize
your graphics and add content.
Joyce Evans, Idea Design
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