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Joyce Evans . |
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Corporation Content is fine... now add the dressings The internal pages look very nice and professionally done. I can see the ability here to make a great site. It appears to be a difficult, but not impossible, subject matter to grab the interest of potential customers. __ The first thing I notice about your site is that there is nothing to motivate me to download your product. The home page is full of text links and no visual interest. __ When I clicked on the link for the online demo, it took a few seconds to realize that I was on a different page. I checked the URL to see if it just reloaded. Upon closer inspection I saw that it was a new page (but so close in color and layout) that it wasn't noticeable, after scrolling down I saw where I needed to click again for the demo. __ Your content is there, you just need to find a way to grab your visitors and make them want to stay long enough to download your offering. Joyce |
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