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Here's a better view of the full page. Not a bad design at all... in fact there's a lot of good to say about this page. We had to ask why the block of copy was crunched over to the left, when it would have been much better enlarged a font size <fontsize=4>, then spread across to meet the right margin. That would have allowed more width for the left column. The attempt to line up with the Toll Free "dot" was admirable. So, making that type a bit smaller, and moving it right (under the "Business") would still have afforded more room, without sacrificing readability.
Now, back to the article.

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